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Breathing In Autumn edition by Ava Deniz Literature Fiction eBooks

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Breathing In Autumn edition by Ava Deniz Literature Fiction eBooks

I found this love story very moving. It involves two adolescents. The girl, Autumn, is deaf and gets by by lip-reading. Her boyfriend, Jordan, is a grounded tear-away who falls for Autumn because she is beautiful, gifted, marginalised, and hyper-sensitive. He doesn’t want a fast girl and Autumn, over time, makes him care. It’s the material of young adult stories and as such will have a wide appeal.
After some initial doubts about the number of typos in the book, I have come to the conclusion that Ava Deniz is probably writing in a second language. On most pages there are problems which are not just to do with the occasional slip. I will provide an example which appears about halfway through the book, near the beginning of Chapter 14 : “It is impressive that she is interested to not let her deafness get in her way of common things which I certainly have taken granted.” There are also problems with layout. Had the book been free of these matters I could have given four stars but for the moment can’t give more than two or three. I would recommend an editor and ghost-writer. I know of at least one novel that was meticulously corrected and won a prize.
It’s a shame the author of “Breathing In Autumn” has not had the novel proof-read because it is a very heart-felt book about young love. Of course, readers who have no problems with typos and other mistakes will find the novel touching even if somewhat over-sentimental. The book is very comprehensible despite its mistakes.


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Breathing In Autumn edition by Ava Deniz Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews

I found this love story very moving. It involves two adolescents. The girl, Autumn, is deaf and gets by by lip-reading. Her boyfriend, Jordan, is a grounded tear-away who falls for Autumn because she is beautiful, gifted, marginalised, and hyper-sensitive. He doesn’t want a fast girl and Autumn, over time, makes him care. It’s the material of young adult stories and as such will have a wide appeal.
After some initial doubts about the number of typos in the book, I have come to the conclusion that Ava Deniz is probably writing in a second language. On most pages there are problems which are not just to do with the occasional slip. I will provide an example which appears about halfway through the book, near the beginning of Chapter 14 “It is impressive that she is interested to not let her deafness get in her way of common things which I certainly have taken granted.” There are also problems with layout. Had the book been free of these matters I could have given four stars but for the moment can’t give more than two or three. I would recommend an editor and ghost-writer. I know of at least one novel that was meticulously corrected and won a prize.
It’s a shame the author of “Breathing In Autumn” has not had the novel proof-read because it is a very heart-felt book about young love. Of course, readers who have no problems with typos and other mistakes will find the novel touching even if somewhat over-sentimental. The book is very comprehensible despite its mistakes.